What an exciting piece of writing Mercy. It's very entertaining to see it come to life as a movie. I love the descriptive language you used to describe the wind - The wind was like a giant stomping outside. Well done working so hard to complete this.
What an exciting piece of writing Mercy. It's very entertaining to see it come to life as a movie. I love the descriptive language you used to describe the wind - The wind was like a giant stomping outside. Well done working so hard to complete this.
ReplyDeleteI like the car and your speaking because you were confident. Great clouds.
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