An introduction tells the reader information about the topic. A hook makes people want to read your story with a suprising fact.
First we watched a video that explains what are different parts to writing an introduction. Then we wrote hooks about Mr Ogilvie.
Next we an introduction with hook about three topics. An example for the life cycle of a butterfly is Did you know that butterflies lay their eggs under a leaf or plant? The life cycle of a butterfly takes 28 days to 32 days. Butterflies have four stages of life. They are: eggs, caterpillar, chrysalis, and butterfly.
An other example for fireworks is Did you know that the largest ever firework display was in Thunder Over Lousiville? Fireworks use gun powder, metal salt and strontium carbonate (red firework). When they mix together it makes a loud bang.
Lastly an example for chocolate is Did you know that it takes 400 coca beans to make one pound of chocolate. There are 4 mechanisms on how chocolate are made. They are cocoa beans, cocoa butter, sugar, milk powder of alternative milk. The process can take up to eight days. depending on the species of cocoa bean.
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